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Thread: ARTS: Poem

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    Member Getchi's Avatar
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    ARTS: Poem

    Pain felt, now returned
    Faith anew - rebirth
    Nothing else I can do.

    SatToday
    LaH.


    Plz move this to poetry if it's ok.
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-24-2021 at 02:32 AM.
    Nothing to do? Why not Sit?

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    Gassho

    Sat, lah
    求道芸化 Kyudo Geika
    I am just a priest-in-training, please do not take anything I say as a teaching.

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    Thank you, Getchi, I felt that.

    Gassho

    Heiso
    StLah

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    Thanks Getchi

    There's space here to ponder...

    Gassho, Chris satlah

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    仁道 生開 - Jindo Shokai "Open to life in a benevolent way"
    May we all grow together in our knowledge of the Dharma

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    Hi Getchi. I had to read your poem several times to understand its power. In college, I read that the best poems are ambiguous. I saw this in your poem. I then felt your pain mixed with hope. This is a powerful poem.
    Gassho
    sat/ lah
    Tai Shi
    "Nothing is so beautiful as spring--/ When weeds in wheels, shoot long and lovely and lush: Thrush eggs look little low heavens, and thrush/ Through the echoing timber does not rise and wring/ The ear it strikes like lightening to hear him sing;.." Hopkins

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