Sitting in zazen,
Poems come. Just thoughts, don't grasp.
Standing, I forget.
Gassho,
Nick
Satlah
Sitting in zazen,
Poems come. Just thoughts, don't grasp.
Standing, I forget.
Gassho,
Nick
Satlah
Hi Nick
It's more of a senryu (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senry%C5%AB) than a haiku but not bad at all!
You don't have to write in 5-7-5. That refers to Japanese morae (sound units) rather than English syllables which tend to be longer than morae.
Gassho
Kokuu
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