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Choboku
02-01-2022, 04:43 PM
My 9 year old wrote this, and i was quite impressed:

The moon sparkles
As the stars are skittering
Across the sky

Sat today
Adam

Kokuu
02-01-2022, 04:51 PM
Lovely! I love the combination of 'skittering' and 'sky'!

gassho2

Bokugan
02-01-2022, 11:42 PM
Very nice!

Gassho,

Bokugan
SatToday LaH

Bokugan 墨眼 (Ryan)

"Moment after moment, everyone comes out of nothingness. This is the true joy of life." -Shunryu Suzuki _/|\_

Nengei
02-02-2022, 07:01 PM
gassho2

Gassho,
然芸 Nengei
Sat today. LAH.