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Getchi
11-06-2020, 05:14 PM
Pain felt, now returned
Faith anew - rebirth
Nothing else I can do.
SatToday
LaH.
Plz move this to poetry if it's ok.
Geika
11-06-2020, 09:31 PM
Gassho
Sat, lah
Heiso
11-08-2020, 07:48 AM
Thank you, Getchi, I felt that.
Gassho
Heiso
StLah
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Yokai
11-12-2020, 02:03 AM
Thanks Getchi gassho2
There's space here to ponder...
Gassho, Chris satlah
Shokai
11-12-2020, 02:12 AM
gassho2
Tai Shi
01-22-2021, 11:04 PM
Hi Getchi. I had to read your poem several times to understand its power. In college, I read that the best poems are ambiguous. I saw this in your poem. I then felt your pain mixed with hope. This is a powerful poem.
Gassho
sat/ lah
Tai Shi
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