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Kokuu
10-29-2019, 10:24 AM
Hi all
Feel free to post your own haiku on the theme of autumn or spring depending on which hemisphere you are in!
Please try and keep your images crisp, clear and simple.
Here is one from Mitsu Suzuki to get you started:
Autumn wind
nothing but graffiti
playground
Masoaka Shiki:
Singing somewhere
back of the shoe closet
a katydid
And me:
trying
each jumper in turn
early autumn
Gassho
Kokuu
-sattoday-
Heiso
10-29-2019, 10:55 AM
One from me:
Windy swing park
Dads on phones
on a rare day off
And one from Fay Aoyagi:
overslept
I blame the quietness
of rain
Gassho,
Neil
StLah
Kotei
10-29-2019, 01:48 PM
Autumn breath
ruffles the fraying crest
sunday visit
Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.
Shōnin Risa Bear
10-29-2019, 03:27 PM
Old blossoms falling.
Brand new blossoms are also
old falling blossoms.
-- Ryokan
New blossoms blooming.
Old blossoms, though they fade, fall --
are new blossoms too.
-- me
gassho
doyu sat today
Cooperix
10-29-2019, 03:37 PM
Maybe a free form one from me...
Winds blow golden
Cranes back
Ah!
Gassho
Anne
~st~
Hoseki
10-29-2019, 06:12 PM
leaf after leaf
falling into the river
oh! a new grey hair
Gassho
Hoseki
sattoday
Jakuden
10-30-2019, 01:22 AM
Naked branches
rain dripping from faded colors
autumn hillside
Gassho,
Jakuden
SatToday/LAH
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Kotei
10-30-2019, 01:13 PM
Tumbling leaves
humming autumn tunes
leaf blower
Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.
Meitou
10-30-2019, 01:16 PM
this old coat
smells of wood smoke
autumn again
Gassho
Meitou
Sattoday lah
Kokuu
10-30-2019, 05:32 PM
Wow, some really beautiful work!
gassho2
Kokuu
-sattoday-
I'm enjoying reading these. Thank you all. Inspiration to write my own is alluding me at the moment as anxiety around completing my Rakusu has a grip.
Gassho
Anna
st
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Shokai
10-30-2019, 08:28 PM
Maple and Oak leaves,
Bunches of colored dry leaf
Autumn follows Summer
gassho, Shokai
stlah
Geika
10-30-2019, 09:12 PM
Hot all day
Cold at night
San Diego
:D
Gassho
Sat today, lah
Kotei
10-31-2019, 07:41 PM
Misty fields
Cranes are gonna stay
climate change
Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.
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