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Kokuu
10-29-2019, 10:24 AM
Hi all

Feel free to post your own haiku on the theme of autumn or spring depending on which hemisphere you are in!

Please try and keep your images crisp, clear and simple.

Here is one from Mitsu Suzuki to get you started:

Autumn wind
nothing but graffiti
playground


Masoaka Shiki:

Singing somewhere
back of the shoe closet
a katydid


And me:

trying
each jumper in turn
early autumn


Gassho
Kokuu
-sattoday-

Heiso
10-29-2019, 10:55 AM
One from me:

Windy swing park
Dads on phones
on a rare day off

And one from Fay Aoyagi:

overslept
I blame the quietness
of rain

Gassho,

Neil

StLah

Kotei
10-29-2019, 01:48 PM
Autumn breath
ruffles the fraying crest
sunday visit

Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.

Doyū
10-29-2019, 03:27 PM
Old blossoms falling.
Brand new blossoms are also
old falling blossoms.

-- Ryokan

New blossoms blooming.
Old blossoms, though they fade, fall --
are new blossoms too.

-- me



gassho
doyu sat today

Cooperix
10-29-2019, 03:37 PM
Maybe a free form one from me...

Winds blow golden
Cranes back
Ah!

Gassho
Anne

~st~

Hoseki
10-29-2019, 06:12 PM
leaf after leaf
falling into the river
oh! a new grey hair

Gassho
Hoseki
sattoday

Jakuden
10-30-2019, 01:22 AM
Naked branches
rain dripping from faded colors
autumn hillside

Gassho,
Jakuden
SatToday/LAH




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Kotei
10-30-2019, 01:13 PM
Tumbling leaves
humming autumn tunes
leaf blower

Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.

Meitou
10-30-2019, 01:16 PM
this old coat
smells of wood smoke
autumn again

Gassho
Meitou
Sattoday lah

Kokuu
10-30-2019, 05:32 PM
Wow, some really beautiful work!

gassho2
Kokuu
-sattoday-

Onka
10-30-2019, 08:00 PM
I'm enjoying reading these. Thank you all. Inspiration to write my own is alluding me at the moment as anxiety around completing my Rakusu has a grip.
Gassho
Anna
st


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Shokai
10-30-2019, 08:28 PM
Maple and Oak leaves,
Bunches of colored dry leaf
Autumn follows Summer

gassho, Shokai
stlah

Geika
10-30-2019, 09:12 PM
Hot all day
Cold at night
San Diego

:D

Gassho
Sat today, lah

Kotei
10-31-2019, 07:41 PM
Misty fields
Cranes are gonna stay
climate change

Gassho,
Kotei sat/lah today.