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Kokuu
12-15-2018, 02:01 PM
Hi all

This is a haibun (a combination of prose and haiku first developed by Matsuo Basho, especially in his book The Narrow Road to the Deep North (Oku no Hosomichi)) I just had published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society.

I hoped it might be appreciated here:

Zazen

First light. With fumbling hands, I reach for matches. Striking one, I wait for the initial burst of flame to die down, then gently place it tip to tip with a stick of Japanese incense for a few seconds. The stick is thin and around six inches long, fragile enough to need careful handling so as not to break. As it catches light, the tip begins to glow, and I note the familiar aroma of sandalwood and jasmine enter my nose, slowly raising it to touch my forehead in a sign of respect. Again, with slow deliberate movements, I place it fully upright in a bowl of earth and take my seat on the cushion.

mountain lake
the mist clears
breath by breath


Gassho
Kokuu
-too ill to sit at the moment-

Shinshi
12-15-2018, 04:44 PM
Congratulations Kokuu! Really beautiful.

Gassho, Shinshi

SaT-LaH

Shugen
12-15-2018, 10:29 PM
Gassho,

Shugen

Sattoday/LAH

Mp
12-15-2018, 10:40 PM
Lovely Kokuu, thank you sharing. =)

Gassho
Shingen

Sat/LAH

Byokan
12-15-2018, 10:56 PM
Kokuu, that is so beautiful. Congrats on publishing. :) I've never seen that form before. Haibun -- love it! Very much appreciated indeed.

Gassho
Byōkan
sat + lah

aprapti
12-16-2018, 12:00 AM
thanks, Kokuu. and metta..

gassho2

aprapti

std/lah

Shokai
12-16-2018, 12:50 AM
Thanks Kokuu, beautiful

gassho, Shokai

stlah

Washin
12-16-2018, 07:04 AM
Beautiful, Kokuu. Thank you for sharing.

Gassho
Washin

Jakuden
12-16-2018, 02:47 PM
As usual, you bring the reader right to the moment, even when you are unable to sit. Sharing the aroma of sandalwood and the clearing mist with you dear Kokuu.

Gassho,
Jakuden
SatToday/LAH

Sekishi
12-16-2018, 03:10 PM
gassho2
Sekishi
#sat #breathbybreath

Hoseki
12-19-2018, 01:06 PM
This was lovely.

Gassho
Hoseki
Sattoday/LAH

Cooperix
12-19-2018, 07:09 PM
Kokuu,

light, visual and evocative.
thank you.

Gassho,

Anne
~st~