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  1. #1

    Haiku

    Autumn Samu

    Rake the leaves
    Reveal the grass
    Ah...the northern breeze!



    gassho,

    Denis

  2. #2

    Re: Haiku

    gassho...

    If I may:


    Rake the breeze
    reveal the leaves, Ah...
    Autumn grass



    Taigu

  3. #3

    Re: Haiku

    Hi.

    _/_

    Rake the breeze
    reveal the leaves, Ah...
    Colours of the mind

    mtfbwy
    Fugen

  4. #4

    Re: Haiku

    Wonderful! Wonderful I love turning this around and insideout.


    Rake the mind
    Reveal the breeze...Ah
    Autumn Leaves

    gassho,

    Denis

  5. #5

    Re: Haiku

    Yes, truly precious and wonderful of both of you...


    Rake the haiku
    reveal the mind Ah
    Autumn-grass-breeze


    gassho

    Taigu

  6. #6

    Re: Haiku

    GASSHO TO EACH OF YOU... WONDERFUL POST

    loose the rake
    forget the leaves
    ah...the first snow falls

  7. #7

    Re: Haiku

    **

    first snow melts
    found the rusty rake
    pick it up

    Gassho
    Shohei

  8. #8
    disastermouse
    Guest

    Re: Haiku

    The only haiku I've written recently is .... 'blue'.

    I did write it in the margins of 'The Method of No-Method', however.

    Chet

  9. #9

    Re: Haiku

    Autumn breeze
    rakes the grass;
    no more leaves.

    gassho,
    Michael

  10. #10

    Re: Haiku

    Hi.

    Autumn turn spring.
    New leaf.
    Treeleaf.

    Mtfbwy
    Fugen

  11. #11

    Re: Haiku

    autumn leaves,
    and I miss it,
    and I stow the rake.

    Idle hands are,

    sleeping.

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