Haiku

Autumn Samu

Rake the leaves
Reveal the grass
Ah...the northern breeze!



gassho,

Denis

gassho...

If I may:


Rake the breeze
reveal the leaves, Ah...
Autumn grass



Taigu

Hi.

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Rake the breeze
reveal the leaves, Ah...
Colours of the mind

mtfbwy
Fugen

Wonderful! Wonderful I love turning this around and insideout.


Rake the mind
Reveal the breeze...Ah
Autumn Leaves

gassho,

Denis

Yes, truly precious and wonderful of both of you...


Rake the haiku
reveal the mind Ah
Autumn-grass-breeze


gassho

Taigu

GASSHO TO EACH OF YOU... WONDERFUL POST :D

loose the rake
forget the leaves
ah...the first snow falls

**

first snow melts
found the rusty rake
pick it up

Gassho
Shohei

The only haiku I've written recently is .... 'blue'.

I did write it in the margins of 'The Method of No-Method', however.

Chet

Autumn breeze
rakes the grass;
no more leaves.

gassho,
Michael

Hi.

Autumn turn spring.
New leaf.
Treeleaf.

Mtfbwy
Fugen

autumn leaves,
and I miss it,
and I stow the rake.

Idle hands are,

sleeping.